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Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
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0 posted 2002-06-30 03:34 PM




While the child sleeps

Misty dark shadows

banishes love

A chilling sphere

binds

tomorrow's laugh...



© Copyright 2002 Neeraja Wittebrood - All Rights Reserved
Krishankins
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1 posted 2002-06-30 10:43 PM


"A chilling sphere binds tomorrow's laugh"

You almost suffocated me with this line. wonderful write!

Krishankins

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

deep_thought
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since 2002-06-28
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2 posted 2002-07-01 05:31 AM


A lot of darkness in there....
unleash it, I'm waiting for more

"if every cloud has a silver lining, how come the cloud is much bigger?" - Something I asked my mum a long time ago

arthur
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3 posted 2002-07-01 09:25 AM


interesting
arthur

Neeraja
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4 posted 2002-07-06 08:06 AM


My dear readers... thank you for your sweet words about my poem!  

Love, Light and Happiness!

Neeraja

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