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Neala
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since 1999-08-21
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0 posted 2002-06-28 07:12 PM



All those years
Were you so blind,
You did not see that
I was there?

Why did you choose her?

Now return to me brokin hearted.
What do you expect?
I can not go back in time
And be what I use to be.

We are older,
Life has changed.
I am not that person.
You left me
So you could find your own way,
With her.

So don't you dare come back
And think you can return
With my arms wide open,
To you.

-Neala



© Copyright 2002 Rachel Parrish - All Rights Reserved
devina
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since 1999-10-28
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Cali
1 posted 2002-06-28 08:57 PM


Rachael...one word..

EXACTLY!!!

you tell em...I enjoyed this piece of you....

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



Krishankins
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since 2002-06-23
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2 posted 2002-06-28 11:11 PM


I find it hard to fathom that people can be so inconsiderately ignorant to another. I feel your pain.

I love it!!!!!!!

Krishankins

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

Purity
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since 2001-11-20
Posts 526
Once Upon, USA
3 posted 2002-06-29 01:13 AM


This is so on the "mark" for me. Even when "she" did to him exactly what he did to me, he comes back looking for empathy, yet blindedly so.

Just exactly...
Just perfect...
Just dead on it...

I loved this, and needed it tonight of all nights. Thanks so much!

Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
4 posted 2002-06-29 10:07 AM


Your all very welcome although I am greatful you all enjoyed it so much.
-Neala

kinson
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since 2002-05-13
Posts 66
somewhere between here and there
5 posted 2002-07-01 01:13 PM


rachel you know im on your side, always, but for just a second, think of his pain, thats all im going to say on the subject, its none of my bizz
Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
6 posted 2002-07-01 02:25 PM


You don't even know who this is about and what happend. It isn't the guy I was talkin about last night. Plus you don't know what he did to me. So don't tell me to worry about him.

-Neala

arthur
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 678
england
7 posted 2002-07-01 02:40 PM


that told him
arthur

Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
8 posted 2002-07-01 02:43 PM


I didn't mean to be mean but Chris jumped in when he shouldn't have I got defencive. Hehe!
-Neala

kinson
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since 2002-05-13
Posts 66
somewhere between here and there
9 posted 2002-07-01 08:00 PM


i only said to think about how that other person feels, i dont know if he is justified, or a complete waste of time, you do, im just saying that all things aside, think about how he feels, we forget in this game sometime that we should consider others, dispite what they have done to us, im offering my stand, i never asked you to listen, just the museings of a blind idiot, holding on to his childish and obviously undesired ideals which in the end mean nothing to anyone but me, im sorry
Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
10 posted 2002-07-01 09:31 PM


It is cool Chris I just got to defencive. You don't need to appolgize.
-Neala

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