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deep_thought
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 24


0 posted 2002-06-28 07:04 AM


Let me be


This is one of my rare positive sides.
I was always the strange one, and today I think not changing myself paid off. This is what kept me going...



each time I wonder about this world
coming down around me, it's not worth
despair loneliness, pain and hurt
I need a path to guide me,
a path, so I can see
there's a thought racing round
bright, blinding not broken or bound

my time will come
criticism see
until then, world...
...just let me be

my drummer; I hear my call
to others I seem to stumble, fall
the goals I have, only I know
thing I see, ideals I follow
when the world seems to take that away
there's only one thing I have to say

my time will come
convention balk
until then, world...
...just let me walk

astray is where you look at a path from
wrong simply depends on who won
look at it form where you are and see
shout it out...world, just let me be


© Copyright 2002 deep_thought - All Rights Reserved
kinson
Member
since 2002-05-13
Posts 66
somewhere between here and there
1 posted 2002-06-28 10:10 AM


this poem and your response to one of my poems has persuade me to continue writing. Your poetry made a differnce in someones life. I thank you for your words and I plan to hang the poem on my wall as a reminder.
devina
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539
Cali
2 posted 2002-06-28 02:11 PM


~Just let me be~

very inspiring words here!!!

Welcome to the forums...I hope you'll post around and get to know all we have to offer!!!

Take care!
Devina

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

3 posted 2002-06-28 09:07 PM


Welcome...great first entry...

please check your email

K

tracie66
Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
4 posted 2002-06-30 01:27 AM


welcome to passions
wonderful first post, well done

~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Jessica
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since 2001-06-28
Posts 350
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5 posted 2002-06-30 01:40 AM


WeLcOmE tO pAsSiOnS!!!   I know you will love it!  I can't wait to see more of your work... Awesome write!

deep_thought
Junior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 24

6 posted 2002-07-01 07:28 AM


Thankx. Extremely talented (and nice) set of people out here. Glad to be on board and yes, you can expect a LOT more from me.

"If you have time to chatter,
Read a book.
If you have time to read,
Walk into mountain, desert and ocean.
If you have time to walk,
sing songs and dance.
If you have time to dance,
Sit quietly, you Happy Lucky Idiot."

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