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Krishankins
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0 posted 2002-06-25 11:41 PM



Your bulimic need has taken hold
I struggle to get free
You'll swallow my entire soul
With your insatiable greed

your 100grit love is smoothing my soul

© Copyright 2002 Kristopher Hankins - All Rights Reserved
Purity
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1 posted 2002-06-26 02:10 AM


Incredibly creative. Loved the play on words. Good poem Kris!
bsquirrel
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2 posted 2002-06-26 03:08 PM


Jeez, you keep knockin' words out of the park, Kris.

These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun.
-RHCP

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