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Krishankins
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0 posted 2002-06-25 10:30 PM



I've built a wall around myself
To keep the heartache out
But what I've trapped inside my soul
Has turned my sighs to shouts

your 100grit love is smoothing my soul

© Copyright 2002 Kristopher Hankins - All Rights Reserved
Mother_Earth
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1 posted 2002-06-25 11:10 PM


Krishankins, you have said a lot in these few lines.  And I see that is what you meant to do.  You do it very well,  ME
bsquirrel
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2 posted 2002-06-26 03:12 PM


Cool.

These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun.
-RHCP

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