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Out of the ashes
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Out of the ashes |
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kinson Member
since 2002-05-13
Posts 66somewhere between here and there |
Broken hearts and broken dreams Line the path that I'm walking I look back for old times sake But nothing lives behind my wake I look forward and I see light In the dark the moon shines bright Smiling faces in the sun Are omens of what is yet to come But I'm always haunted by the past And the things that wernt meant to last I'll never forget the things I've done But I know my life has just begun |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
"wernt" - "weren't" Other than that, awesome read. And no, I'm not risking an elephant attack.  It's great to see people who're willing to get up, start over, and live s'more, no matter what they've got left in the past."Sooner or later, they'll never grow up." -Jim Steinman (unreleased and almost completely unheard, but hey) |
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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA |
Chris I like it very well writin it is one of the greater ones..*claps*...now write more....hehe -Neala |
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nnie Junior Member
since 2002-05-17
Posts 14 |
i like this poem. its a good happy poem and it doesnt suck. i love you and i hope you write more poems. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Good stuff, kinson. Proof y' shouldn't stop writin'. These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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deep_thought Junior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 24 |
Something I would love to read again and again. All of us have skeletons in our closets. Question is, are we still gonna call the movers? Excellent. "Hope is not the conviction that something will turn out well, but the certainty something makes sense, regardless of how it turns out." |
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