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dreary is the dawn (anvrill challenge)
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dreary is the dawn (anvrill challenge) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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O how dreary is the dawn mocking my eternity! I creep to crypt, contempt of pawn, as I curse serenity. Bleak are colors of the sky as I embrace the blackened soul. May darkness bleed o'er all things bright-- as wretchedness tarnishes gold! Cursed sun to rise on high-- how dare it shine on those unjust! Oh how dreary is the dawn-- as I crave my own death dust. [This message has been edited by serenity (06-24-2002 01:10 PM).] |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
YAY!  Now that is a fine example of Bad Goth Poetry. But at the same time, it's good. Don't'cha love how that works? "I'd rather be anything but ordinary, please." -Avril Lavigne |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
HEH HEH...that was so much fun, I wanna do it again! (that's ME--never satisfied with ONCE!)Thanks for the fun, Lady A!  |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
By all means, do it again. These things are addictive! I just wonder where mine disappeared off to... Hm."I'd rather be anything but ordinary, please." -Avril Lavigne |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
serinity, very conflicting for me. sort of like having a single candle burning in pitch black darkness. I like this. good one. Krishankins your 100grit love is smoothing my soul |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
That was awful! Awfully good.A guy at work These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
Oh, did I forget to say how rockin' the title is? And don't'cha just LOVE havin' fun writin' complete melodrama? It should happen more often!"Sooner or later, they'll never grow up." -Jim Steinman (unreleased and almost completely unheard, but hey) |
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