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Bad Goth Poem (response to m' own challenge)
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Bad Goth Poem (response to m' own challenge) |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now 
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Grr, fear me, the Bad Goth Poet! And go read my challenge or you won't understand.  Without you. I ache for the embrace of a final eternity, swooping me out of the claws of this dreary world. Oh, to feel the sweetly cold breath of darkness caressing my burning cheek, the thought of forever before me unfurled. In this world of damnation, not the darkest spell can raise you from your eternal grave. My heart aches and burns and breaks and yearns for one more touch from your bleeding hands. Oh, how I cry, these tears of blood burning like acid down cheeks wasted by years of strain and sorrow. It feels like I've lived forever without you in this dreary, broken, messed up world. If even the darkness cannot answer my call, my yearning for its embrace and eternal sustenance, I do not know where I can turn. I suffer here, broken in your absence. Forever, my love. Without you. Feel my angsty reachiness! [This message has been edited by Anvrill (06-23-2002 04:41 PM).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Ha ha ha! This is so bad, it's good! I love you, silly.These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. -RHCP And for those of you as lazy as me, here's a quicklink to the challenge: here. [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (06-23-2002 04:49 PM).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Hey, let's not lose the genesis of this whole awful thing. These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
grinning....yanno? I didn't know I wasn't supposed to LIKE this stuff!  (or am I just not supposed to admit it?) But I think "camp" is wunnerful too! (valley of the dolls fan, here) ooops...there goes any claim of legitimacy I might have had! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Nah, yr allowed t' like it. I do, in a small, soft, awful way. It's hard for good writers to write trash, ah guess.These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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