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Deepdarkangel55
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since 2002-06-06
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Somewhere deep in wonder

0 posted 2002-06-22 01:37 AM



Do you see what I feel?
Can you tell me whats wrong with me?
I feel like someone is stabbing me with a knife
It scars my outside apperence but also crashes my dreams, hopes, and feelings
My heart screams out in pain
My mind races through all my life trying to remember where I went wrong
As a bright light flashes before my eyes
I realize that life might actually have a real meaning
I will search until I find the truth
But I hope in the end its what I really wanted

© Copyright 2002 'Angel - All Rights Reserved
bsquirrel
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1 posted 2002-06-22 02:28 PM


I like the questioning anger here.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Anvrill
Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710
in the interzone now
2 posted 2002-06-22 02:29 PM


Ouchy... I've been there. Maybe too many times.

Feel my angsty reachiness!

arthur
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 678
england
3 posted 2002-06-22 07:47 PM


God save us from the truth about ourselves
arthur

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