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bsquirrel
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0 posted 2002-06-22 12:53 PM


Old old old old OLD poem.

Zero
I can be alone if I remind myself that a kiss looks like a zero,
And can convince my lie I'm not missing anything (nothing).
The digital clock blows me kisses all the time,
Red and waiting for me to die.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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Tiersdin
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1 posted 2002-06-22 12:56 PM


As they say... An Oldie but goodie!

~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

wranx
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2 posted 2002-06-22 01:07 AM


Yes, yes, and I can hear "blues" being sung in the background...and I haven't done acid since..

This is quite spare, and does all that it should. More would have been, just more.

~wranx

P.S. I agree. There is certainly an amazing amount of talented people in Open, Some are actually astounding. But a post over there goes 5 pages deep within a couple of hours.
Like I said before...I've looked at the archives. Goodgoogamooga!!

"Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do....just remember to wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein.

bsquirrel
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3 posted 2002-06-22 01:30 AM


Wranx,
Glad y' enjoyed that old angst o' mine. And yes, poems do get buried ... which is why Dark is the perfect place to erect the corpses!

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (06-22-2002 01:36 AM).]

Anvrill
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4 posted 2002-06-22 09:45 AM


How old is old, anyway? I mean, you chopped/diced/threw out most of yr old stuff, or at least the ones *I* considered good enough to keep.


Hmmph.


*pout*


Anyway. It's so old, I don't remember it, so that speaks volumes.

bsquirrel
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5 posted 2002-06-22 01:14 PM


Believe me, some things are better left forgotten.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Anvrill
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6 posted 2002-06-22 02:38 PM


Baby! Be good to yourself!

Feel my angsty reachiness!

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