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Anvrill
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since 2002-06-21
Posts 710
in the interzone now

0 posted 2002-06-21 11:21 PM


Is no one else as angsty as me?



Kissed by a drop of rain.

Rolling cooly down my lips.

Kissed by a drop of rain.

So why aren't I serene?



Face turned toward the sky.

Arms held out,

smile stretched taught.

Arms now falling

(fading,

shrinking),

and I'm holding myself,

shivering

in the rain.



Caressed by a torrent of rain.

Wild hands of an absent lover.

Caressed by a torrent of rain.

So why does it feel so cold?



Water on my cheeks;

nature's misplaced tears.

Reaching the point

where it's all going numb.

Eyes downcast,

still shivering

in the rain.




© Copyright 2002 LL Hager - All Rights Reserved
bsquirrel
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since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855

1 posted 2002-06-21 11:24 PM


Yr angst rocks my world. Don't you all agree? (crickets)

God, I do love Dark.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

wranx
Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
2 posted 2002-06-21 11:51 PM


Hey, This stuff is GOOD! Wranx likes.

As far as loving Dark...
Well... Everytime I venture into Open, I hang out awhile, then run back to Dark where my kind o' folk be.

~wranx

"Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do....just remember to wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein.

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast
3 posted 2002-06-21 11:58 PM


Welcome to Passions, Anvrill

I'm really enjoying your poems!

someone tells me that you are amazing!

guess he was right! (but then, I'm sure he's a bit biased, eh?)

*wink*
~R.T.

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

Krishankins
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Senior Member
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972
Texas
4 posted 2002-06-23 07:48 PM


aaahhhh....the misery of love.
it makes me thirsty for a storm.

very nice

Krishankins

your 100grit love is smoothing my soul

Stryder
Junior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 29
Silent Hill
5 posted 2002-06-23 09:07 PM


*reads poem*

Oh, how I love the darkness...

*evil laugh*

-Stryder

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