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Deepdarkangel55
New Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 7
Somewhere deep in wonder

0 posted 2002-06-21 01:27 AM


My heart burns with hurt
My mind races with confusion
Where did I go wrong?
My eyes search for truth
My feet lead me astray
Where do I go from here?
So many conclusions
So many problems
How did I come across so many mistakes?
Love, freedom, and Happiness
I search for these, but they're nowhere to be found
Will I ever find what I'm looking for?

© Copyright 2002 'Angel - All Rights Reserved
Neala
Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-06-21 01:59 PM


I hope your find it...I enjoyed however.
-Neala

bsquirrel
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855

2 posted 2002-06-22 12:15 PM


I agree with Neala. The situation sucks, but at least it made good poetry!

She said burn ... together.
-TON

wranx
Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
3 posted 2002-06-22 12:18 PM


A good poser in poem form.

The short answer is...life.

~wranx

Stryder
Junior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 29
Silent Hill
4 posted 2002-06-23 05:14 AM


Hey, what can you do?  Life just flat out sucks sometimes, and you can't really do anything about.

"Life another day, and climb a little higher."

-Stryder

Anvrill
Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710
in the interzone now
5 posted 2002-06-23 04:24 PM


When y' look long enough, you ALWAYS have to find something! It's a rule. Believe me.

Feel my angsty reachiness!

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