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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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Windy legs like long curtains. Body black imperfect pearl. Taste its fur upon my lips. Feel its latch across my face. Seems to crawl upon my eyes to sip out my sight. Liquid fascination stare at the sun gone night. Weight of quarters on my chest. Feel the poison kiss of kill. Growing sky across my limbs, center fire ember hold. Moves on down, its blanket shadow. Slows the feeling end of fire. Without smoke and without words upon this bed I now expire. She said burn ... together. |
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LadyPeach1 Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282 |
This was a really cool poem. Even though the topic was SpiderDreams, you could tell it had something to do with a Spider because of the way you wrote this, it was awesome, good details in your words!!! LIKED THIS! LP1 |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
 Thanks, LadyPeach1. Sheesh, I'm a moderator in this forum and I only get one reply to my posts? You know what that is? Pathetic! Lol.She said burn ... together. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Perhaps these musings are... bsquirrel, I would truly like to read your "meal of bones", however, I just checked out the archives...OMG..I don't need another hobby. If, and at your leisure, you stumble across this piece, I will surely read it and may even comment.lol thanks ~wranx "Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do....just remember to wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Hells' bells, forgot to comment on this one. You evoke some nice dark imagery here, I picture an opalescent arachnid form...and I haven't done acid since the 60s'. (sorry, couldn't help it) ~wranx "Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do....just remember to wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Black widow or just plain big old black spider..... either way, splendid job, Mr.Squirrel I should visit this forum more often...I keep forgetting its here  ~ spidery hugsLyra |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
 Glad y' enjoyed that wacky thing.She said burn ... together. |
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