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kinson
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since 2002-05-13
Posts 66
somewhere between here and there

0 posted 2002-06-19 10:42 AM


What did I ever do to you
Other then be so kind
You don't know what your lies are doing
Destroying things it took so long to find
Others have mistreated you
And I know your not all there
But dont you see your hurting others
Or are you so far gone that you don't even care
You made me lose so much
For things I've never done
Your tearing me apart
I hope your having fun

© Copyright 2002 Chris - All Rights Reserved
arthur
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 678
england
1 posted 2002-06-19 02:14 PM


been there
we are all often cast in the role of victim for no good reason
arthur

bsquirrel
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855

2 posted 2002-06-20 01:24 AM


Ouch!

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
3 posted 2002-06-21 01:57 PM


I am sorry Chris...I liked it though.
-Neala

wranx
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
4 posted 2002-06-23 12:26 PM


Well put Kinson.

Reminds me of my second...(or was that third?) ex-wife.

~wranx

"Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do....just remember to wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein.

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