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Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
0 posted 2002-06-18 10:00 PM


Sittin' with somethin so wrong.
Waitin' for it to take me away.
Even though I know it's
Wrong I wan't it all the more.

Can't you please
Take me away.
I wish to be gone.
Please be my savin grace!

I want to know that I
Mean that much to you,
For you to rip me away
And make it all the better.

Please be my savin grace.

-Neala
© Copyright 2002 Rachel Parrish - All Rights Reserved
kinson
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since 2002-05-13
Posts 66
somewhere between here and there
1 posted 2002-06-19 10:29 AM

good rachel,  very good
bsquirrel
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
2 posted 2002-06-20 02:29 AM

Enjoyed.

She said burn ... together.
-TON
wranx
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
3 posted 2002-06-21 12:02 PM

Nice, I liked this, even though you can't spel and can't have any grammer.

I think we've all been in this spot, if you haven't, you have made yourself too safe.

~wranx

"Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do....just remember to wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein.
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