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Dark Poetry #3

Who's Goin?

LilTai
Member

since 2002-06-08

Posts 189
United States

0 posted 2002-06-17 10:31 PM

(I don't think this would be considered "dark" at all...but it didn't seem to fit in "Open", so....)

Who's goin' to hell anyway?
everybody who doesnt follow
what's written in stone?
if so, heaven'll be lonely
Whatever happened to just being
a "good" person?
We're all so scared
and for what?
If my heart is pure
then I'll live as such
and die knowing it

Tai

I'm an idealist..I don't know where I'm going, but I'm on my way =)

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

1 posted 2002-06-18 01:42 AM

It works fine in Dark. Dark's kinda a loose term around here, anyway.

It fits my bill.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Helium Balloon
New Member

since 2002-06-18

Posts 8
MB Cannada

2 posted 2002-06-18 10:25 PM

your poem to me is open minded. nothing is written in stone.

LadyPeach1
Member

since 2001-06-04

Posts 282

3 posted 2002-06-20 12:53 PM

This is a lil' wierd cause like several people including myself have written poems dealing with Heaven, Hell, and Religion? It's like, everyone has their own opinion and to me each opinion is interesting and To some extent agreeable with. I just thought about this since I have read so many poems about this kind of topic. Good write!
LP1

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