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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
Lord Lord ,why do you wait outside my gate, Why do you knock ,watch and wait? Knock on my heart,but not today, Lord ,let me be,please go away! Lord ,why this unceasing care Is my wicked soul so rare? Lord ,this life is just for me I am deaf to Angels and to thee. Lord ,why do you waste your time I am Satan's child,not thine. arthur |
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LadyPeach1 Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282 |
Ohhhh... I have NEVER read a poem on this site that I haven't liked, but I did not like this at all! It in a way offended me since I'm a Christian, Read my new poem I just posted called Ready or Not. This poem is pretty scary!! Being the devil's child? No. Thats not cool. LadyPeach1 |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
lady peach do you not see that you can read this poem another way that God is ever present ever willing always waiting never gives up on any soul use your imagination arthur |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes, this poem, as all poems can be interpreted many ways...and indeed.... the good Lord does win in the end. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Something that makes me think is never offensive to me. Well done, arthur. I loved it. She said burn ... together. |
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