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nnie
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since 2002-05-17
Posts 14


0 posted 2002-06-15 03:50 PM


I don't really like you
I don't know why I try
I hate saying I love you
Because i don't like to lie

I dont know what to do
I can't really say
I don't want to tell you
Maybe some other day

Maybe you love me
Maybe I'm wrong
I don't know anymore
So I'll just play along


[This message has been edited by nnie (06-15-2002 05:59 PM).]

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kinson
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since 2002-05-13
Posts 66
somewhere between here and there
1 posted 2002-06-16 09:39 PM


very good, you shouldnt be so hard on yourself, you really are a good poet
bsquirrel
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since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855

2 posted 2002-06-17 10:10 PM


Very cool poem. The letters are th' color of spilt milk. Or salt.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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