Which Of The Two Shall I Be

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Dark Poetry #3

Which Of The Two Shall I Be

News_From_Nowhere
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since 2002-06-14

Posts 173
CU, NY

0 posted 2002-06-14 04:50 PM

Which of the two shall I be?
A pacer on floors wearing worn out carpet?
A married mortal under midnight with nothing but worries?
Like two single digits in an arithmetic problem
Multiplying children rambling lost in the minds of others
While the original two digits remain in the same place
Or hide the wedding gown
Handcuff the children before they're born
Understand the misunderstood full moon
Having complete control of nothing and loving every minute of it
Reproduce caveman enemies leaving backwards directions behind
You're surrounded by jealous gods.

"So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm; yes,

arthur
Senior Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

1 posted 2002-06-15 06:39 AM

firstly
Welcome
secondly
liked it
very much
more please
arthur

wranx
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since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

2 posted 2002-06-16 10:49 PM

Ya know? It may be possible to be both. But that would be a tough write...No?

Whudhejussay?

~wranx

"Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do....just remember to wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-06-16 10:52 PM

Awesome

Cold hands means a warm heart

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

4 posted 2002-06-18 01:39 AM

Welcome! Enjoyed th' poem. Check yr mailbox for a special greeting.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Purity
Senior Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

5 posted 2002-06-21 12:14 PM

Welcome, News (belatedly) Don't know what to say, but awesome first post! More, please!?!

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

6 posted 2002-06-23 08:00 PM

Welcome fellow newcomer!!
liked it a lot. can't wait til the next one.

Krishankins

your 100grit love is smoothing my soul

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