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Hopeless Romantic
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 27


0 posted 2002-06-11 10:40 PM


   The words of a observer

You hurt the people who need you
You hurt the ones u clam to love
All to make u feel better

You lead them on
Making making them happy
Then tear it away
For the littlest thing

One day you will feel the pain
And know one help you
No more words
No more Threats
Remeber the pain you cuase
Becuase it will come back around
  


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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-06-11 10:44 PM


A lot of truth in this piece

Cold hands means a warm heart

kinson
Member
since 2002-05-13
Posts 66
somewhere between here and there
2 posted 2002-06-12 03:20 PM


theres so much she you dont know, cause theres so much she didnt tell you, your right, it is petty, thats why i left, its all so petty, she crys over me every week, for the stupidest thing, so this is ending it, ending her pain, this is what she said she wanted, so i gave it to her, she might cry now, but she wasnt crying then, and she probubly wont cry tomarrow, hate me if you want, but youv been lied to, i know she doesnt see it like that, and you might not right now, but you have been, youv been played, you were played the same way i was, shes drowning and she almost took me with her, but i have too much to live for, you and rachels problems wernt my fault, and the real problems wernt your fault, im seeing clearly again, i know who i am, do you?, or did you lose yourself in her as i did, a question to ponder, dont cast it off like rachel did
Hopeless Romantic
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 27

3 posted 2002-06-13 01:44 PM


Chris your makin excuses
I know she dosnt tell me everything
She dosnt have too. i have nothing more to say to you,and your not worth it ANYWAY

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HAVE A NICE LIFE

Hopeless Romantic
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since 2002-05-22
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4 posted 2002-06-13 01:45 PM


to The_Loner_23 thank u
bsquirrel
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5 posted 2002-06-20 10:04 PM


Ouch! I liked this.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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