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Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-06-11 10:22 PM



You were the greatest friend
To me
For a while
Now I lay hear
Alone
Cause I tried to
Fix what was left
And now your gone

So I sit hear trying
Not to need you
And go back to the way it was
The way it was when
I wasn't real
When I was a hidden person

So I have to crawl back in
To be a person
That I don't remember
Cause your gone
And I don't
Know who I am

-Neala

© Copyright 2002 Rachel Parrish - All Rights Reserved
wranx
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
1 posted 2002-06-11 10:43 PM


Interesting, isn't it, that we take another persons presnce on as part of our own identity...and when they're gone, it's like losing a limb, or maybe a toe, or maybe just some hair.

enjoyed.
~wranx

"Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do....just remember to wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein.

bsquirrel
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since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855

2 posted 2002-06-17 10:09 PM


Hard lessons .... really felt this one.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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