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LadyPeach1
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0 posted 2002-06-11 10:20 PM


When the clouds roll in,
And the rain falls through,
Everything is gloomy,
Doesn't it just make you sad and blue?
All you do is sit by the window,
And pray for a ray of light,
To make that ugly black sky,
All sunny and bright,
Those rainy days,
Oh, how you wish for it to go away,
Wishing for tomorrow,
To hopefully not be another rainy day.


[This message has been edited by LadyPeach1 (06-11-2002 10:23 PM).]

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skyshine
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1 posted 2002-06-11 10:23 PM


I don't care for rain....storms I like, with thunder and lightning and wind, but not plain rain......and when it rains I wish the sun would shine too....very nice write, LadyPeach1.

~sky

You look inside my wild mind
never knowing what you'll find
still I want you all the time
yeah I do
'cause you get me
~Michelle Branch

skyshine
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2 posted 2002-06-11 10:23 PM


Forgot to put this in my library.

~sky

You look inside my wild mind
never knowing what you'll find
still I want you all the time
yeah I do
'cause you get me
~Michelle Branch

LadyPeach1
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3 posted 2002-06-11 10:25 PM


Thanks for the reply!!  I JUST wrote this so I didn't expect a reply THAT fast.  but thanks alot.
LADYPEACH1

MidnightSon
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4 posted 2002-06-12 02:09 AM


i like the rainy days... but summer rain.
the kind when it's still warm outside and drenching the city.

i like this write. (sunshine is *alright* too.) =)

"The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite."

LadyPeach1
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5 posted 2002-06-13 06:35 PM


Thanks for the reply.  I like rainy days but whenever its raining everyday it gets annoying.  cause in IL. it rains ALL THE TIME!  So sunshine is nice when we get it!
LP1

News_From_Nowhere
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6 posted 2002-06-14 05:00 PM


I simply cannot stand myself "on the grey days". Nice poem.
LadyPeach1
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7 posted 2002-06-15 01:19 AM


Thanks for the reply News From NoWhere.  Ya Rainy days can kinda suck.  But sometimes I love rain!!  But just not all the time.
LP1

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8 posted 2002-06-20 09:51 PM


I'm a freak -- I love rainy days! And I enjoyed yr poem for makin' me think of 'em.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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