navwin » Archives » Dark Poetry #3 » You Cared
Dark Poetry #3
Post A Reply Post New Topic You Cared Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Neala
Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-06-11 01:58 PM



You and I use to know
Anything and everything
About each other
But lately I don't want to
Give you the time of day

You can say all you want
Although you never mean a word
You can trash everything I care about
And turn around and say you'll stop
And expect it to be ok
When you never even say
Sorry

How could you think
I am such a fickle little girl
I am a person
And when you mess with
The important things
I walk right out
of your Life

-Neala

© Copyright 2002 Rachel Parrish - All Rights Reserved
Hopeless Romantic
Junior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 27

1 posted 2002-06-11 03:00 PM


Good poem
I like it alot
  

Neala
Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
2 posted 2002-06-13 07:11 PM


Thanks Matt.

bsquirrel
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855

3 posted 2002-06-20 10:03 PM


Yes! Strength be good!

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Dark Poetry #3 » You Cared

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary