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renathon
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since 2002-06-09
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0 posted 2002-06-10 01:40 AM


"The Ferocious Bunny's Reminder"

A dream within a dream...
In my mind you can be more than that,
because my mind is a machine.
And the air—the world is my gasoline...
and my mind is a machine.
You can take food and water from me.
But my mind,
my mind is an enduring machine.
You can rip my limbs off, you can take my fangs—
but it doesn’t matter.
My mind is a racing machine
that needs no arms, that needs no legs.
A cold, precise machine,
working with deadly accuracy, always.

A dream within a dream,
my mind is a machine.
And at will, I take the liberty to fly.

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arthur
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 678
england
1 posted 2002-06-10 05:28 AM


often thought this way myself
as if i were 2 beings
one just watches and takes note
not involved
just watching

wranx
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
2 posted 2002-06-10 11:39 AM


"My mind is a racing machine
that needs no arms, that needs no legs.
A cold, precise machine,
working with deadly accuracy, always"

Nice work...interesting title


wranx

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
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east coast
3 posted 2002-06-11 11:51 AM


I've been to your site.  I found it very creatively unique...

~R.T.

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

bsquirrel
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4 posted 2002-06-24 01:17 AM


No fair, you used the title to sucker me into readin' a treatise on solipsism. Oh well, it was a good treatise. Look at me! I use big words!

These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun.
-RHCP

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