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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA 
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Lonliness I am always lonely. I wish I wasn`t. I think I have friends. I find out I haven`t. Lonliness You get a new boyfriend Yet he neglects you Neglects to tell you when you shall speak again He shows no respect What kind of guy is that. Lonliness I will always be lonely For how long I do not know But all I do know is that my lonliness will last forever Until the end of time. |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
lonliness can be overcome by effort of will or enjoyed as blessed solitude a time to grow uninhibeted by the demands of others arthur |
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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA |
I loved the way you put it is very true but are some things that are crappy that we must overcome. -neala |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Nice poem, jerky boyfriend. wranx (sorry wranx, I had t' actually move a moderatin' muscle and change the word to "jerky" -- I got a post deleted once for words similar (in the body of a poem), and the resulting freakout caused me to leave Passions for many, many moons) -Mike (bsquirrel) [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (06-24-2002 01:08 AM).] |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
if loneliness is always with you, isn't that a lifelong companion... a horrible feeling to be side by side with...but misery loves any kind of company. ....that's just grim optimism i guess. good write. it has that seeking answers quality. "The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
At least yr only suffering from lonliness, not loneliness. Lonliness can be supressed by listening to a good album and pondering the situation. Loneliness can only be dealt with by not feeling lonely anymore. These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
You remind me of me when I was younger... Except I never had the boyfriend to neglect me. Believe me, from too much personal experience, I can tell you that things get better. Feel my angsty reachiness! |
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