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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-06-08 06:45 PM


Lying is bad
Makes happy couples break up
Makes the boy or the girl feel like they deserved
to be lied to
Lying makes all people sad
From adults down to children
Lying is so stupid
Yet why do we do it when we hurt our loved ones when we do?
Because we don't want to upset our loved ones
But that doesn't make lying right
I hate lying and that is that


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MidnightSon
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since 2002-05-15
Posts 312
between the gutter & the stars
1 posted 2002-06-11 06:01 PM


i'd be lying if i disagreed with you.
the wrong things seem to make the most sense...

"The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite."

kinson
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since 2002-05-13
Posts 66
somewhere between here and there
2 posted 2002-06-11 09:34 PM


lieing is bad, unlike this poem, which is good, its a good poem about a bad thing, complements.
bsquirrel
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since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855

3 posted 2002-06-24 12:58 PM


So what's this poem doing lying at the bottom?

These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun.
-RHCP

Purity
Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526
Once Upon, USA
4 posted 2002-06-24 01:05 AM


And takes on the shape of a chalice of truth at that! A pure piece, loner, and yet I share in the sadness of difficulty others unlike yourself have with truth. Reminds me of a line in Murder of Crows..."Never waste the opportunity to tell someone you love them; never accept the blame for something you did not do, and always tell the truth...it's easier to remember later."
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