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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-06-08 06:35 PM



Burn Burn Burn Down to the ground
I don`t care if the school burns
I just want it to burn burn down to the ground
Burn Burn Burn Everything Burn
The books, the papers, the tables, The lockers
Just burn down to the ground
I don`t care about the school
I just want it to be made into ash
I just want it to burn burn burn Down to the ground So I don`t have to deal with it anymore
Nothing but bad memories
Nothing but memories of getting picked on.
Just let it burn.

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MidnightSon
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since 2002-05-15
Posts 312
between the gutter & the stars
1 posted 2002-06-12 02:22 AM


i just plain like this.
"Just let it burn."

"The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite."

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082
of Depression
2 posted 2002-06-12 02:56 PM


Reminds me a bit of the late 1960's
there were parts of the city that burnt down.
Sparks of rage started the fires
houses and lives burnt to the ground.
it solved nothing
it helped nothing,
just left ash and forgotten dreams.

Gloom

kinson
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since 2002-05-13
Posts 66
somewhere between here and there
3 posted 2002-06-12 03:32 PM


so, you got picked on, and you wanna turn that pain around, and take it out on an establishment, or what it represensts, ok, good write though
wranx
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
4 posted 2002-06-12 11:36 PM


The 60's catch-phrase was "Burn, baby burn".
Looks like things haven't changed so much after all.

~wranx

"Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do....just remember to wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein.

bsquirrel
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5 posted 2002-06-23 03:13 PM


Reminds me of a very controversial Calvin & Hobbes where Calvin dreams of bombing the school from a fighter plane. For pure angst, it's not a bad (if not constructive) flight of fantasy.

I miss Calvin and Hobbes. :p

These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun.
-RHCP

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