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LadyPeach1
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since 2001-06-04
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0 posted 2002-06-08 12:48 PM


This is my tribute to you my love,
I'll miss you forever now that your gone,
But I know your looking down on me from heaven above,
Why did you have to go?
Why didn't I get to say goodbye?
Life just isn't fair,
You were taken away from me,
I wish I could hold you again,
But that will never again be,
All the years that passed us bye,
And now I can't see why,
You had to leave me so soon my dear,
Everything doesn't make sense to me?
Now what is going to happen to we?
I'm am alone, just me.
I'm scared and I'm lost,
I don't know where to go,
I'll miss the days you made me smile,
And when the clouds were out you would make the sun show,
My God why,
Did you have to go right now?
To go on keeps bringing me to How?
What will I do without you by my side,
To hold my head up and give me pride,
I feel so angry,
I feel so blue,
I feel frustrated at God,
I don't know what to do,
I wish there was a way to bring you back,
So all this sadness I would lack,
I wish I didn't feel so sad and blue,
But now your gone,
And I miss you....

This is dedicated to my Uncle that just passed away and he left 3 kids and a wife.  Rest in peace Uncle Joe.


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intheshadows
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 7

1 posted 2002-06-08 01:20 AM


Beautiful poem. It really touched me. My best friend of 8 years just died.
jenn08
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since 2002-05-29
Posts 12
Wa, USA
2 posted 2002-06-08 01:28 AM


Tragedy, unfortunately is a way of life.  Sometimes the unexplainable happens, and you just have to "hope" that it's for the best.  Just don't get too lost, and if you do, ask yourself if that's where your uncle would want you?
EarthenSoul
Member
since 2002-05-30
Posts 163
WA, USA
3 posted 2002-06-08 02:15 AM


Beautifully mourneful.  

In this world
We begin to die
The very moment
We are born
But I believe
That life is a cycle
And all is reborn

God bless you and your family.

arthur
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 678
england
4 posted 2002-06-08 05:30 AM


there is little anyone can say that helps
A time will come when you can remember him and smile
be grateful for the joy you shared
But it is not yet
It will however come to you
bye and bye
love
arthur

LadyPeach1
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since 2001-06-04
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5 posted 2002-06-08 10:27 AM


Thanks everyone for your replies, Ya, this was written for my aunt.  Her and her 3 children are very devastated and its hard losing a loved one.  God will take care of them!!
LP

wranx
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Moved from a shack to a barn
6 posted 2002-06-11 06:11 PM


A lovely tribute Ladypeach, I'm sure that your uncle is watching over all of his loved ones.


~wranx

"Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do....just remember to wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein.

LadyPeach1
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since 2001-06-04
Posts 282

7 posted 2002-06-11 10:27 PM


Wranx, thank you so much for your reassuring words.
LP1

bsquirrel
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8 posted 2002-06-23 03:33 PM


God bless.

These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun.
-RHCP

Anvrill
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since 2002-06-21
Posts 710
in the interzone now
9 posted 2002-06-23 04:05 PM


Death is so oogie...

And I am so mature. :P

Feel my angsty reachiness!

LadyPeach1
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since 2001-06-04
Posts 282

10 posted 2002-06-24 11:30 AM


Bsquirrel and Avrill!  Thanx much for the replies, you guys are so great!!!
LP1

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