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senorita
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since 2002-05-30
Posts 2


0 posted 2002-06-07 07:39 PM


you cause me so much pain my body shakes
from all these tears I'm crying
I tremble with greif
what did I do to deserve this?

words hurt more than swords
they pierce through your heart
and stay there forever
true friends wouldn't do this

never again, I won't forgive you
you say I'm anorexic then you call me fat
I can't take all this
I never knew I could cry so much

then there's you
you stand there like nothing's wrong
you let them do this to me
rip me into pieces

I would die for you
but you won't even defend me
then you ask why are you mad, baby
how can you do this to me?


© Copyright 2002 carmen - All Rights Reserved
jenn08
Junior Member
since 2002-05-29
Posts 12
Wa, USA
1 posted 2002-06-08 01:36 AM


Betrayal is always unexpected, maybe you should let "them" read this, and see what happens
EarthenSoul
Member
since 2002-05-30
Posts 163
WA, USA
2 posted 2002-06-08 01:39 AM


Friendship is about love, understanding, and support.  Not hurtful words and betrayed trust.  Stay strong and always be true your own soul.
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