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arthur
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 678
england

0 posted 2002-06-07 05:26 AM



remember me

Go to the shore where the sea laps bright,
Wait by the rock for the end of night.
Look to the east for that first coil of light.
Before the things of day are yet to be,
Yet night has quitely slipped away.
Be still now,
And remember me.

arthur

© Copyright 2002 michael bennett - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2002-06-07 08:28 AM


I like this Arthur.
Quiet and still...
Feels hopeful.
~hugs across the pond~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

EarthenSoul
Member
since 2002-05-30
Posts 163
WA, USA
2 posted 2002-06-07 01:35 PM


I absolutely love this!  It's quiet, yet strong.  Great write!
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