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Feelins Within Me |
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Deepdarkangel55 New Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 7Somewhere deep in wonder |
What I feel right now I can’t express I feel so alone among the dark shadow night I thirst for more knowledge and understanding But don’t like the outcome My heart that is darken by my unforgettable past. I grieve to myself to where it seems like I’m going to burst. Why do I feel this way? Will I always feel so empty? So dried up inside? Just shoot me take away the miserable feeling I have inside me Why I ask does it have to end like this? Why? |
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EarthenSoul Member
since 2002-05-30
Posts 163WA, USA |
Whenever I feel this way, I write. You have, within your soul, the answers to all the questions you will ever have. Writing poetry is the best way I know to ask myself those questions. Later, when I go back and read things I've written, I learn I've found my answers. I wish you brighter days. |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
some of the most importent questions just dont have answers. Each day a new beginning arthur |
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blakloks Member
since 2002-06-01
Posts 60 |
like EarthenSoul said, when i feel down i write out my feelings, and i can see that u haf dun that too, which is really good. i feel much better when i go back now and look at what i felt when i was down and know that i have gotten out of that spot. also pple whu see my poems can give me advice on what to do ... ur poem exactly expresses what i feel sometimes. i really love it. great poem and hope u haf gotten all that out of you. ~hugs~ , blakloks |
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renathon Junior Member
since 2002-06-09
Posts 23 |
When I write painful poetry, I'm expecting for a little bit of that pain to be removed from my body and onto the paper. Unfortunatelly, I feel this poem does not solve anything, but merely discusses the pain. By asking a question at the end, I think that writing it has had no positive benefit on the author. I guess it's possible that simply talking about that which pains us, can also help us deal or understand it. I don't know what I'm saying. Great poem. <A HREF="http://members.cox.net/lordrenathon">The Site</A> |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
they say that with time, anything can be forgiven. i never put much stock into that cliche', but everyday that i wake up to...i feel like maybe my chaces to atone are a little better. it doesn't have to end like that. a good write, full of wandering. "The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I can't believe not one moderator ever sent you a welcome card. (this thing was buried) Check yr e-mail for one now. And who hasn't felt like that from tahm t' tahm? These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
I used t' think like this all the time... Sometimes things get better. It's a scary thought, but it's true. Feel my angsty reachiness! |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
I, like MANY others, have felt this way. It's when I look back at the times before that I get the strength to get through. Just one more time. I really like this. Krishankins your 100grit love is smoothing my soul |
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