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moshpit
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since 1999-11-25
Posts 143
cebu, philippines

0 posted 2002-05-18 07:03 AM


I heard your voice while listening
To a Joey Ayala song and I realized

How much you missed them--
The songs you used to

Sing, the poems you used
To read.

© Copyright 2002 guile canencia - All Rights Reserved
Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

1 posted 2002-05-18 07:22 AM


Mosh - this is one of those rare short poems that genuinely says so much, with so few words. I like it very much...

K

fractal007
Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958

2 posted 2002-05-18 07:43 AM


Wow.  There are some poems, like this one, that are able to convey so much emotion - particularly a grave sense of nostalgia, with so few words.  This is most definitely one of them.  A beautiful job my friend, and one that deserves to be in my library.

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

coyote
Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077

3 posted 2002-05-18 11:37 PM


Great writing, moshpit.
Very much like e.e. cummings.

coyote

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