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fractal007
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since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958


0 posted 2002-05-16 08:27 PM


I hate you.
You are my creation,
a piece of literary
work that some may
well call a poem.

The keys I strike to make you breathe with life,
The only way that you can live is by my hand,
and by my hand I strike you dead for daring to live.

I hate you,
I dangle you above
my own hell and want you to accept the keys as salvation.
I hate you and yearn for your suffering,
your eternal suffering.

You will spend a thousand, no ten thousand years
in that abomidable pit and scream in tortured
agony, knowing that that eternal ten thousand years
is merely a dot compared to the greater eternity
that awaits you.

I've kept the fires lively burning
just for you and you alone.

my creation

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

© Copyright 2002 fractal007 - All Rights Reserved
coyote
Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077

1 posted 2002-05-16 10:20 PM


I think It rocks.
Much here about life and creation in general.

Coyote

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