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Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-05-16 06:50 PM



I felt my heart jump from my body
As you told me
You are no longer a piece of me
And my life
You told me I never loved you

I knew this day would come
When you would leave
You always said,
"I won't leave you, trust me"
But here I am with my brokin self
Laying helpless on the floor

Although I can't have you
I can't let you go
You tried to leave
But for the best moment ever
You came back
And that is all that I will
Need

-Neala

© Copyright 2002 Rachel Parrish - All Rights Reserved
fractal007
Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958

1 posted 2002-05-16 08:12 PM


Nice poem.  I like your imagery in this piece.  Thanks for sharing.

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2002-05-16 10:02 PM


I have learned that no words are written in stone...
My girlfriend tells me she will never leave me and I hope that it is true but she is speaking from the way her heart feels today...hopefully her feelings will not change...I know that I will try my hardest not to do something to change her feelings...James

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