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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon 
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To mourn so deeply the loss of something I never had, is a mystery that makes sense - in it's own way. © 5/15/2002 |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This makes more sense than to mourn something you have had then lost. Makes a lot of sense if you have a void. I really liked this one Jonas. |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
I've always liked reflective poems like this. Good job here. It is somewhat reminiscent of the Haiku/senryu style. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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