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Neala
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0 posted 2002-05-15 09:53 PM




I am sorry if this makes no since to you it was written for a friend. Who will hopefully read it.
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Every Day
In the morning
I see you walk across the commons
And you sit next to me
Today you wern't there
And you said, "(Nothing)"

Every Day
In the afternoon
I call you up
Pour out my little life
Across that phone
Today you called me
And you said, "I don't think we should talk"

Every Day
In the past
I use to have
Are now lost things cause
Today I don't know you
And you said, "Hi, My names Joe."

-Neala

[This message has been edited by Neala (05-15-2002 09:53 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-05-15 10:34 PM


Well yes it does make sense as there is a lot of hurt in this poem and I hope whomever reads it understands that and you get a big hug

   ~ Carpe' Diem ~

Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
2 posted 2002-05-16 06:37 PM


I am glad you understood it and I hope he does read it. Thanks.
-Neala

kinson
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since 2002-05-13
Posts 66
somewhere between here and there
3 posted 2002-05-22 08:30 PM


he did read it
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