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bsquirrel
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0 posted 2002-05-14 05:58 PM



Give me your music.
Touch me soft song.
Paint me slow writhing.
Glow red image, long.

Corporeal flower.
Read your scored page.
Dipped in old fire.
Leaves of sad rage.

She wrote:
Her words were candy bells.

We tasted their unwrapture.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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coyote
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1 posted 2002-05-14 07:52 PM


I liked the linguistics here b.
Doppelgangers as well as phonetic flow to the imagery.


coyote


bsquirrel
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2 posted 2002-05-15 01:40 PM


Thanks, coyote! Tho' I'm gonna have to, at some point, submit an A-material poem to this site, so Severn will think more than huh? when she reads me.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Madame Chipmunk
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3 posted 2002-05-18 11:35 PM


Her words were candy bells.

We tasted their unwrapture.

unwrap those candy bells please...and share the acorns!

cute poem, Mr.Squirrel

~furry rodent hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

bsquirrel
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4 posted 2002-05-20 01:57 AM


Ah, my fellow rodent to rescue me from obscurity! Always appreciated, Lyra.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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