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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2002-12-15 02:53 AM


Until September

A mother tells her daughter about relationships.
Who to date and who not too.
Who to leave and who to stay with.
You've reversed the roles and I won't put up this this.
When you figure out which one is the mother
I'll figure out which one to kiss.
Allgood things must end.
Even daughters grow up and move away.
I'm curious about the excuse you'll use when
she departs on a September day.
For then it will only be you and me left to find our place.
Stripped of all your excuses and me staring you in the face.
You forgot what love is about.
Will you ever remember?
I'm putting this relationship on hold
until the month of September.

JamesLee
December14
2002

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (12-15-2002 02:54 AM).]

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Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
1 posted 2002-12-18 12:16 PM


Stripped of all your excuses and me staring you in the face

liked that line particularly ... and the rest of the song as well...

regards,
sudhir
p.s. check too ... should it be to? in who to date who not "too"

[This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (12-18-2002 12:17 PM).]

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