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Purity
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since 2001-11-20
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0 posted 2002-05-12 12:12 PM


To say you’re my best friend
Isn’t enough
For your listening, understanding & advising

To say you’re my mentor
Isn’t enough
For your guidance, example & teaching

To say you’re my life-line
Isn’t enough
For your support, endurance & faith

To say you’re my motivation
Isn’t enough
For your dedication, willingness & compassion

To say you’re my Mother
Isn’t enough...

To ever begin to convey how much I love you.

[This message has been edited by Purity (05-12-2002 10:28 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-05-12 12:28 PM


You know...if I were your Mother and got this, it definitely would be enough!  Well done, and very poignant.  

We should spend less time worrying about when our life is going to end and more on when it's going to start!

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2 posted 2002-05-13 05:37 PM


I loved that. And it's not enough t' say...

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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