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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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My mind can’t tell And I am not worried Dreams are real And reality is a dream That’s all I see, How many times I write And recite The same song With different rhymes So you see a new piece Revolving amid my thoughts I look out the window And I see freedom Everyone judges me Besides me Mad at me for I speak Truth is not what you want So I lie to you all along I guess I won’t speak forever And my soul will rest in peace Never… Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.) |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Dont conform to the sad ways of the world around you, speak the truth even when it hurts... if you dont your wishes may never be known. Good job on this one. Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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LadyPeach1 Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282 |
This was a very good poem, you painted your sadness well. LP1 |
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