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Dark Poetry #3

I did not love her

JamesBowie
Member

since 2000-11-25

Posts 252
big old Bangor Maine up by the shack

0 posted 2002-05-03 10:03 PM

I twirled her soft red hair
with the ends of my fingers
while she bent with her head down
looking away with deep red eyes
crocodile tears streaming
And I couldn't tell her a thing
not what she wanted to hear
she believed what she felt
that I should have felt the same
but her emotions would soon distort
anger replacing what was,
hating me for just one fault

I did not love her

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2002-05-04 02:56 AM

Excellent piece, I really enjoyed the visuals you created in this one.

Imagination is more important that knowledge
~* Einstein said so *~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2002-05-11 05:17 PM

Yes if we do not have the love within us we can not possibly give it...James

MIdsummerRain
Member

since 2002-05-19

Posts 175
St. Louis, Missouri

3 posted 2002-05-24 11:58 PM

"...I twirled her soft red hair
with the ends of my fingers...I did not love her..." I loved it my friend!

For in much wisdom is much grief
& he who increases knowledge
increases sorrow...
Eccl. 1:18

darkstar
Member

since 2000-08-09

Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA

4 posted 2002-05-26 04:43 PM

That was very nicely written. I can't say that I can relate, as I was always on the other end of the spectrum (still am it seems). It's hard to let someone down like that though.

*darkstar*

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