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sgreybe
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since 2000-04-28
Posts 209
London, UK

0 posted 2002-04-21 02:17 PM


It was the chance of a lifetime
A dream come true
The day I realised
My love for you

Even better
Life became
When you confessed
Your love the same

Never have I
Been hurt that much
Never have I
Felt so out of touch

For when you walked out
Without looking back
You took my life
All that I had

I never ever
Want to see your face
Never again
Will I take your place

Never again
Will you find my voice
My help, my love
Taking back your choice

Live your life
I hope it's good
And always know
I NEVER understood.

© Copyright 2002 Sylvia Greybe - All Rights Reserved
Alicia
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since 2002-03-22
Posts 279

1 posted 2002-04-21 03:26 PM


~What ache in your words, yet there seems strength too, to move beyond, to not allow the taking over. Well said. *Peace.
Dark Kisses
Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas
2 posted 2002-04-21 05:42 PM


Wow! This one struck me ALOT!!  One week ago today I went through the exact feelings.  The sharing of the word , love, the feelings developing and then him walking out without any given reason.
That written above is my reason for being on strike on relationships!!!  I have had enough already!!!!

Good expression,
Dark

A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.

sgreybe
Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 209
London, UK
3 posted 2002-04-26 07:33 AM


Thanks guys for your replies.  It really warms my heart to know people still read my stuff!!!!!

Thanks again and hugs and strength to you both.

Love Sylvia

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