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fractal007
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since 2000-06-01
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0 posted 2002-04-13 02:40 AM


The Base of the Action

Do the maker's hands and the purpose of the pot live as one?
Container and goal
Living as disjointed twins
One man and two fates

The Real Base

Is this God's crude material used to form a chance to do it right?
Two merge unwisely
The living result is born
Clay and pot are one

The Conclusion

The burns on these rock walls don't look
so bad when seen by this new light I have.

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

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Purity
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since 2001-11-20
Posts 526
Once Upon, USA
1 posted 2002-04-15 12:40 PM


And how creatively ironic the triuness of this piece. Short, specific, and very nicely to the point. I liked this one immensely...great job!
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