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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas 
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Pounding the shoreline, washing over stone levee. Clouds swirl above me as flash of light leaves me blind; The boom rattles senses, another maelstrom in my mind. People don't notice; they carry on with each life, Not recognizing quiet signs of internal strife. My shore is eroded, skeletal boats kiss the sky, And like those sailors, my dreams slowly die. There is a lighthouse, crafted by the wind and rain. No light to guide me, empty orb weeps in pain. Surcease will be coming, as the lightning tears the sky: I just have to wait for my hurricane's peaceful eye. Alicat, the Persnikitty {insert disclaimer here:} |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Alicat, I really liked this. I enjoyed  Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Dark stuff Alicat. I really liked it a lot. Your a desert dwelling sailor.... |
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Baroni Member
since 2001-10-14
Posts 94Ontario, Canada |
"People don't notice; they carry on with each life, Not recognizing quiet signs of internal strife." I like it.... excellent post. Find your eye soon, heya. Due to circumstances beyond your control, you are master of your fate and captain of your soul. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Hey Ali...great to read you again in here...how you doing anywho? Hugs and stuff.. like yer poem btw  K |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
I can hear you reading this, you know. You need to come back and visit sometime, you're missing the best weather in Oregon.  Hugs, m'friend Nic |
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