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qtpieelmo
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Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

0 posted 2002-03-23 12:45 PM


BACK TO YOU!

I've dreamed of getting married,
ever since very young.
Now I see it with you.
I want you to be the one!

I've always pictured my dream house,
now I need you to have a part.
One place for us to share,
you've already found the key to my heart.

I've dreamed of teaching children,
since the day I stepped into school.
Now I want you there to greet me,
after a long day, a kiss from you.

I've always wanted children,
since I could play pretend.
Now I see them with your eyes,
part of you in the end.

Everything in my life,
my hopes, my future, my dreams,
all come to a halt,
because without you, impossible it seems.

I know my way back to you.
Can you find your way to me?
Can we make this all work?
Is this the future you see?

ELMO



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skyshine
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Beneath the northern stars
1 posted 2002-03-25 11:18 PM


Katie, this is such a sweet wish. I hope that everything works out for you and your boyfriend.

sky

qtpieelmo
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Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
2 posted 2002-03-26 12:33 PM


Thanx Sky!! I hope so too!! ELMO
Baroni
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3 posted 2002-03-29 06:18 PM


Wow...  Well-written.  I hope your boyfriend knows what a special person he's with!

Due to circumstances beyond your control, you are master of your fate and captain of your soul.
              - The Angry Bard me  (me)
            

NapalmsConstantlyConfused
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4 posted 2002-03-29 07:51 PM


this is in fact a cute write... i am sort of curious as to how it ended up in "Dark," though. seems more like the kind of thing that would go in "Open."
it's a good bit of writing, sufficiently so that i'm going to add you to my library, elmo, but i'm lost wondering how you picked this forum for it.
-Dave

qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
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Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
5 posted 2002-03-30 09:06 PM


Thanx you guyz!! Yea well it got into the dark passions because this is the only forum I usually post in, cuz most of my stuff belongs here & the guy that I wrote this about is someone who I am no longer with & I wish he knew his way back to me--but thanx again for the replies!! ELMO
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