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A Love Forgotten
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A Love Forgotten |
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LadyPeach1 Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282 |
The last petal on the rose falls, The pictures crooked on the walls, What happened to the love? Wasn't it enough? Looking at the front door, Walking down the stairwell, This home that used to be filled with love, Is now an empty shell. All the memories, Now a mirage of what used to be, Nothing left to remember, Not even a family. The dust on the shelves, Everyone by themselves, No way to make this work, Through the unfamiliar house I lurk. The forgotten love, The shattered dreams, The used to be happiness, That turned into screams. As I turn back, To bid the place once where I was happy goodbye, I start to cry, And wonder why..... Why was the love forgotten? |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
because they couldn't see your beauty. i scream with you on this one. beautiful. when the mirages fade, the portrait of your heart will still be there. thanks for sharing it with us. |
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Baroni Member
since 2001-10-14
Posts 94Ontario, Canada |
Wonderfully written... I know this pain, and it cuts deep. I hope you feel better soon. Due to circumstances beyond your control, you are master of your fate and captain of your soul. |
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LadyPeach1 Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282 |
Thank you for your feedbacks! I really appreciate being able to come to a place such as pipTalk and be able to get kindness and support from total strangers! This place really is great, and so are the people that post here. thank you all so much. LadyPeach1 |
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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest |
"My" shared version of "YOUR" pain (we have been through alot).....I love you sooooooo much and I am so PROUD of you. You are everything I am not. Keep up the good work my love. Your an excellent poet!!!!! Very worthy and then some of this place. Keep stretching further beyond. You know what I mean. And by the way, congrats on your latest poetic acknowledgement. You are the BOMB!!!!!! LOVE MOM!! A Love Forgotten The last petal on the rose falls, The picture now crooked on the walls, What happened to the love? Wasn't it enough? Looking at the front door, Walking down the stairwell, This home.... That used to be filled with love, Is now an empty shell. All the memories, Now a mirage of what used to be, Nothing left to remember, Not even a family. The dust on the shelves, Everyone by themselves, No way to make this work, So, through this unfamiliar house I lurk. The forgotten love, The shattered dreams, The used to be happiness, That turned into screams. As I turn back, To bid this place, where I once was happy, Now a final "goodbye"? I start to cry, And wonder why.....?? Why, was the love forgotten? I cannot believe there is a why? Why??? No answer to my cry..... I just sigh....... By the way.....did I mention how much I look forward to reading YOUR poetry?? If not.....THANK YOU....THANK YOU....THANK YOU!!!!!! [This message has been edited by Scarlet Lady (03-20-2002 02:43 PM).] |
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LadyPeach1 Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282 |
Scarlet Lady- You speak words of truth my dear friend! Yes indeed we have been through alot! Life hasn't been as easy as we have expected the last four years, but I have a feeling that you and I will pull through together and make it out of this rut we are stuck in! We just need time and patience to get things right! I LOVE YOU MOM. LadyPeach1 |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful expression of your feelings...hope love revisits your heart...James |
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LadyPeach1 Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282 |
Thanks for the reply James. I'm struggling to find happiness, but I know I'll get there some day! LP |
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