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~Venus~
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since 2000-01-27
Posts 128


0 posted 2002-03-13 03:15 PM


a heart is breaking:
it starts with a crack,
then grows,
widening and lengthening,
until it severs the heart in two.

oh? didn't you know?
that heart was mine.

--

Just so you know, no, I am not going through any sort of break up. This is a rather new piece, however, and I thought I'd post it here.

~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

"She's Love, she loves, and yet, she is not loved."
(shakespeare;venus and adonis)

© Copyright 2002 ~Venus~ - All Rights Reserved
Baroni
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since 2001-10-14
Posts 94
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2002-03-14 06:39 PM


Well written!  glad to hear you're not suffering.  the poem is excellent!

Due to circumstances beyond your control, you are master of your fate and captain of your soul.
                 - The Angry Bard
                  

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