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Dark Poetry #3

I live in a World...

lone_poet707
Member

since 2001-11-17

Posts 70
black hole named Aylmer

0 posted 2002-03-11 11:04 AM

I live in a world
filled with ideals.
I live in a world
where nothin is real.
I live in a world
in which money is everything.
I live in a world
where our future holds nothing.
I live in a world
controlled by terror.
I live in a world
blind to its own errors.
I live in a world
infested with racism.
I live in a world
in total schism.
I live in a world
infected by corruption.
I live in a world
searching for redemption.

Dark Kisses
Member

since 2001-06-24

Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

1 posted 2002-03-12 09:31 AM

Wow this is a darker side to the world.
Anyways .... good flow!
Mags

A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

2 posted 2002-03-12 09:57 PM

This was so well written with so much power.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

Baroni
Member

since 2001-10-14

Posts 94
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2002-03-14 06:46 PM

Excellent portrayl of the world! sounds like a poem I posted a while ago. (cruel world -- you might want to check it out). well written!

Due to circumstances beyond your control, you are master of your fate and captain of your soul.
- The Angry Bard

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