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This Poem Sucks

fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

0 posted 2002-03-06 07:14 AM

This poem sucks.
Many will look back on it with disdain, thinking it sounds like something written by a teenager going
through some stage, or by some silly fool thinking that his thoughts actually have a bearing on the ways this universe unfolds.
This living sucks.
I'll look back on it someday and see just how silly and pointless it was.  I will say, joining in with a
chorus of so many others, "Why did I waste my life on this?  Writing of all things!"  Others with their power suits will be standing beside us, laughing at us.
This pursuit sucks.
I am a machine without oil, a piston moving nowhere.  They told me there was something out there,
by that second cactus to the right.  I used to believe that.  But then I got there.

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

1 posted 2002-03-06 07:20 AM

I believe this is properly titled.
Another title might be
"Ramble On"

Gloom

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