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Dark Poetry #3

What Finds You?

fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

0 posted 2002-03-06 07:13 AM

The jewel that sits above the darkened sea,
Empowering it to glow with life and light,
To call to silence the restless mind and free
The torn and battered heart from the noose pull'd tight
About the long dead life you once held dear,
You recognize as moon and stars in song
And symphony washing away your fear.
This moon can call to action right and wrong,
The beautiful quiet starlit peaceful eve,
Or the fierce and deathly howl of stormy winds
Angry over some injustice long past now,
When people like to name the wind somehow
With names of ages of time to find what finds
The helpless soul with greedy eyes and waits.

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

1 posted 2002-03-06 07:26 AM

Enjoyable bit of poetry,
It starts well, but the rhyme gets disrupted.
What’s up with that?
If there is a supposed significance to it
I fail to see what it adds by it’s lack.
Otherwise the expression is very good.

Gloom

fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

2 posted 2002-03-06 09:06 AM

What's up with that?

I'm rusty.

Thanks fer the response.

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

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